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I’m still not sure about the decision to draw Malutki’s eyes all white, like he’s in the Avatar State or something. I wanted him to look fearsome… But is this the right visual cue? Not sure.

5 Responses

  1. I like the treatment, Peter. He does look fearsome! I can’t wait to see what happens next!

  2. I like it, I think it makes him look more serious for the situation.

  3. Expertly done artwork! Malutki does indeed look a fearsome bruin; the eyes are classically ominous. What does he have up his ample sleeve, I wonder?!

  4. I like the white eyes. It makes the change in the last panel more noticeable. The white eyes give him the look of someone who’s angry whereas the normal eyes show he’s concerned about Rudek.

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